Помогите с Английским,заранее спасибо)!!!! give your opinion about the following ideas or...

Помогите с Английским,заранее спасибо)!!!!
give your opinion about the following ideas or comment on them?
1)Young people tend to unite in groups or organizations becouse they enjoy being together.
2)wearing the same clothes or uniforms, listening to the same music and sharing the same ideas mike membership of such youth organizations or cultures
more attractive, give young people a sense of belonging.

1. Young people tend to unite in groups or organisations because they enjoy being together. 
2. Wearing the same clothes or uniforms, listening to the same music and sharing the same ideas makes membership of such youth organisations or cultures more attractive, gives young people a sense of belonging. 3. Young people are very impressionable and it is not so difficult for adults to use their enthusiasm to their own ends. History knows a lot of such examples. 
4. Young people should be very careful about their choice of organisations as it is a great responsibility. 
5. Political organisations for young people should not exist at all because children are not experienced enough to foresee the results of their activities. 
6. There are very few youth organisations in Ukraine at the moment and they are mostly adult-led political organisations. 
7. Youth cultures or cults usually annoy adults and they have a good reason for that. 
8. Some youth cultures can be dangerous for their participants. 
b) Give your point of view on youth organisations, movements or cults.